Koopa Prince

[Ai-Chan]

Urm.... yeah.... just really wanted some critiques on this It's Bowser Jr's theme I made up!!! Origonal dA post www.deviantart.com/deviation/44897386/?qo=11&q=by%3Arouge-the-shadowlvr&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps

Theme of BJ, by shadowlvr64(me)

Who am I?
I’m glad you asked!
But I can’t answer
When I’m wearin’ my mask

My dad’s a tyrant
He kidnaps the Princess
It don’t bother me none
It’s like the ultimate recess

Part dragon, part turtle
A green-and-yellow Koopa
Hey bein’ a prince
Yeah, it sure is “supa”! …Weeeee!!

I’m called a freak child
‘Cause I ain’t got no mama
Once Dad said Peach was
But, oh holy llama!!

Now I’m adopted
And I’m twelve years old
*gulp* Am I so weird for likin’ gals?
All with b-*whap* faces like gold

Part dragon, part turtle
A green-and-yellow Koopa
Hey bein’ a prince
Yeah, it sure is “supa”…Woo-hoo!

[Brute]

Heh, that made me laugh a little bit, because that pretty much sounds like something Bowser Jr. would say. XD With all the "Weeee!!" and "Whoo-hoo's!!" that you added in there, it gave the poem true character. Good job! ^^

[y4e]

I like this [Flash Me!!1] X3 =P

[Fang]

lol I like this poem. it's pretty good- nice and in character

[Lazy Kitty]

Yes, this was a nice poem. The holy llama part was hilarious. I'd be pretty freaked out if Peach was my mom too. o__o

[Ai-Chan]

Brute: wow, thank you so much!! I'm glad I was able to get his character across well!!

y4e: CX Sorry I ain't Peach...

Fang: thankies, I'm so glad you like it!!

Twisted: heh I like that part too... utter randomness!! Happens when I eat chocolate... and wouldn't giving birth to a shelled creature be painful? I really believed she was his mom for a while... and it was freaky o.O

[Lazy Kitty]

aichan said:

Twisted: heh I like that part too... utter randomness!! Happens when I eat chocolate... and wouldn't giving birth to a shelled creature be painful? I really believed she was his mom for a while... and it was freaky o.O

Ouch... that would be painful. DD:

[Fang]

twistedhumour said:

aichan said:

Twisted: heh I like that part too... utter randomness!! Happens when I eat chocolate... and wouldn't giving birth to a shelled creature be painful? I really believed she was his mom for a while... and it was freaky o.O

Ouch... that would be painful. DD:

Yeah, especially because that shelled creature has spikes Dx