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Post by Brute on Jan 23, 2007 21:14:52 GMT -5
I wrote this poem, because I was simply bored. I tried to relate this poem to music, because I am in fact the music man. XD I know I'm no poet but at least I tried a FULL poem for once. x3
Whenever there is a voice heard from a distance, It makes you want to stand up and dance. The voice sets the mood of the emotion, and lets everybody know to put their feet into motion.
Plenty of emotions fill the scene; be it happy, sad, serious, or love. The dance will be beautiful waltzes delicate like a dove.
Everyone there ponders the question, "what is this voice telling us to dance?" The voice is filled with rhythm, quality, and beautiful reprise. As the people dance, they do not want it to end; for the voice telling them to dance is but a love song.
Enjoy! ^^ Comments and/or critique is welcome also. ;D
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Post by Lazy Kitty on Jan 23, 2007 21:19:21 GMT -5
Lovely poem! I really enjoyed it. I can't think of any critiques, because that poem was amazing. Great job.
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Post by Brute on Jan 23, 2007 22:33:41 GMT -5
Thank you so much! ;D
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